Sunday, October 31, 2010

Writing a Scary Story

We did an activity in my English class. I started writing a "scary story" with a sentence. Then we passed the paper around and each student added a sentence to the story. I've left the spelling and grammar as it was written.


I walked up to the old house and knocked on the door but no one answered. While I wait someone answered, there was a rush wind suddenly came. The door suddenly opened with a heavy sound. And oh may God, how surprised am I , when the door was open I saw a little girl inside. She looked pale and sad, even I could see tears on her cheeks. I was scared. I walk close toward her, slowly because I want to know more about what can make her feel like that. She asked me to walk with her to go inside the house. I answered Thanks and I follow her inside the house and “hang out” with her until the sunshine recurred.

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